Comments | entropicalia: "History to the bone, memory to the marrow..."

entropicalia

"History to the bone, memory to the marrow..."

Aug 13, 2007 10:19

I haven't done this in a while.
Haven't been able, to be honest.
Anyway, here's something different.

( We all learned something from Hansel and Gretel; namely, bread crumbs are an excellent excuse not to return... )

Comments 16

mooserevenge August 13 2007, 14:43:16 UTC

You, madam, should write a book. I'm not kidding.

entropicalia August 13 2007, 14:49:47 UTC

Aw, thanks, love. I'm trying...been trying. I have a problem finishing what I start when it gets to be more than a few chapters, but my biggest and most steady dream is to be a novelist.

mooserevenge August 13 2007, 14:57:18 UTC

You should go for it. Your writing is so good and unique, I'm sure that if you'd be able to write a book you'd get it published without much trouble. I'd buy it, fo su'.

blimpcaptain August 13 2007, 15:32:06 UTC

WHERE'S MY GOT-DAMN FUCKIN' MONEY, HO! I PUT CLOTHES ON YO' BACK AND FOOD IN YOUR GUT...DON'T MAKE ME GO ALL IKE TURNER ON YO' ASS!!!

asfdasfsafsda...j/k...

I'm always impressed by your ability to dip the paintbrush of your diction into the most squalid nooks and begrimed crannies and leave such lush prose in the wake of your strokes. The ending (re: your dad), and a smattering of other real-life references helped to ameliorate the cold, sad feelings that resulted from my impuissant efforts to remove you from the starring role in my mind's eye. Very good, descriptive writing!

entropicalia August 13 2007, 17:11:25 UTC

Must be strange for you to read some of the stuff I write, since you're there for a lot of it and you hear me say some of it aloud and then it ends up all warped into a story, hah.

Thanks for giving me feedback, darlin'. :)

blimpcaptain August 13 2007, 17:20:37 UTC

sometimes, it's very strange. re-imagining that whole scene in strawberry fields was fascinating and a touch disconcerting, though maybe not even for reasons you'd imagine. shattering the child in that guitar-player's eyes by turning him into something of a predator sorta got me outta sorts.

truck on, baby.

siko_k August 13 2007, 15:34:32 UTC

I don't even know what I can really say. Your writing, both fanfiction and original, is amazing. You've really got your own unique style, which doesn't happen too often, y'know? Yeah, I suck at this...

entropicalia August 13 2007, 17:12:22 UTC

Thanks so very much. You don't suck at it. :P You read it, which means the most to me anyway.

siko_k August 13 2007, 18:27:16 UTC

By the way, completely OT, but did you see the short Rogah picture I posted herein?: http://siko-k.livejournal.com/141412.html Awwwww...

Oh the like, 436546456 macros from over the weekend, ha ha.

dhairya August 13 2007, 17:16:23 UTC

Dude, I really love this.

entropicalia August 13 2007, 17:24:40 UTC

Thank you!

klaudyna August 13 2007, 18:01:56 UTC

Oh God... Once you do get published, please make sure your book makes it all the way to the third world of Central Europe, okay? I have to read it. You're too bloody brilliant for words.

entropicalia August 13 2007, 18:04:53 UTC

That's so sweet...thank you so much. Hah, I love that you said 'once' instead of 'if' which gives me hope.