Comments | entropicalia: "I like the cord around sinew..."

entropicalia

"I like the cord around sinew..."

Jul 25, 2006 12:20

With clumsy digits, she took hold of one of his fresh shots and slid it towards herself. It was his cherished Prudence and she was sloshing over the rim with profound insouciance.

( City Bus in C Minor, the first movement. )

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Astonishing boztopia July 25 2006, 16:38:44 UTC

Every time you post, you kill another person's career because they look at your work and realize that there's just no point. If you don't believe me, ask young_egotist. :)

You're truly gifted, Lauren. :)

Re: Astonishing entropicalia July 25 2006, 17:35:07 UTC

Thank you so much!

I hope that's not really true, though. I'd much rather inspire than discourage.

young_egotist July 25 2006, 16:38:45 UTC

Good lord. That's it. I'm never writing again. You just wrote it all. That's beautiful beyond words.

entropicalia July 25 2006, 17:34:37 UTC

Gah! That's very flattering...but never stop writing. :)

Oh yeah, and books. young_egotist July 25 2006, 17:35:53 UTC

I won't stop, I'll just lock it far away in a hard drive, far from the light of the internet or other places people can read things.

Seriously though, that's gorgeous.

bentrazor July 25 2006, 17:25:53 UTC

I know I shouldn't have laughed at the 'holocaust' part, but blast-it-all, I did.

entropicalia July 25 2006, 17:34:11 UTC

Hahaha, that's ok--it's supposed to be funny. Kinda.

ewolts_world July 25 2006, 17:41:00 UTC

Wow. I mean, really your writing is fascinating. Please tell me you have some way of publishing it! Hey email me your mailing address I have some material that is begging for you to use in a story but i dont know if it would work to scan it in and email. ewolterman@gmail.com!

entropicalia July 25 2006, 17:46:28 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.

I'm very curious...email sent!

kittenofwrath July 25 2006, 19:01:12 UTC

What always strikes me about your writing is that...is always seems to contain elements of both the profane and the divine, as if you constantly are able to perceive the darkest and brightest sides to human nature.

It's really fascinating. :) I really enjoyed reading this, and the first few paragraphs were especially grabbing.

entropicalia July 25 2006, 20:46:59 UTC

Both the profane and divine...that's an amazing thing to say, thank you. I love that you said that because I try to get that across in pretty much everything I do. :)