Roses

[eoedad]

Originally, I was going to hang onto this story until Valentine's Day, because it seemed like it would be more appropriate and that it could use a bit more refining. And then I took the character quiz (I got Seishiro. XD ), and discovered that I have no self-control. Surprisingly enough, I still like it even with only a handful of edits.

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[meicdon13]

Seishirou is such a sick ass. But I guess that's why we all love him XD

[eoedad]

Yep! :) I'm considering starting a multi-chapter story, and I keep running into this giant mental brick wall marked "NO. THAT WOULD BE SEISHIRO MAKING SENSE. THAT DOES NOT HAPPEN. EVER."

And Subaru's so oblivious. Even after TB. And we love them both to pieces, even if we wouldn't mind bashing Seishiro over the head with a big mallet a couple of times.

Thank you for commenting!

[meicdon13]

I'd like to bash BOTH of them over their heads with a mallet XD I'd tell Subaru to stop angsting and I'd tell Seishirou to realize that he's in love with Subaru.

[eoedad]

Personally, I'd use the mallet on Seishiro and then just force some Prozac down Subaru's throat. It'd do him good.

I wonder what it would look like if they both realized they were in love with each other like that... oh god bad thoughts

[abydos_star]

Seishirou is such a sick bastard really! the roses were beautiful is a way but this dude makes a vice out of originality.

[eoedad]

He does. The fact that I could write this and not have it be horribly OOC scared me so much.

[iambickilometer]

kl;hdfk;hk SEISHIROU. Goddammit, Seishirou. You don't get to shank me through the heart like that. NOT ON. I AM NOT HOKUTO.

As you can tell, I liked this quite a bit. You, my friend, have talent.

[eoedad]

T.T I've tried to restrain him, and it just doesn't work. I agree. He really needs to stop and just kiss Subaru already! That thing at the end of X-16 didn't count at all! Right, um, nevermind.

Thank you!