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I have been horrendously lazy this month. And last month. Which I have no decent excuse for, except I had to choreograph about five different pieces and it ate me. Literally. I have bite marks on my shoulder, and bruises everywhere imaginable.

But, complaining aside-- this is the sequel-ish-thing to Meeting, and I'm not sure how much sense it

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This was just LOVE. That seem feel as the last piece, but in addition to being absolutely beautiful, this one was also hilarious. Seriously. There were so many moments where I lol'd, but this one had me laughing out loud (literally for once): Kamui is very expressly forbidden to have anything to do with Watanuki, eventually in tones only slightly more restrained than the ones Watanuki uses on Doumeki.

The vampire, therefore, proceeds to stalk him on the openly stated assumption that if he doesn’t want someone following him, it’s because he has something to hide. Not because he might object to having another creepy freak following him around - though Watanuki does enjoy watching his two stalkers pick fights with each other. Even so…

“Look, even if I was hiding something, I would not be doing it while trying to ask Himawari-chan out!”

Gah! So wonderful!

And yet, though it was funny, it was no less touching, even heartbreakingly so, than the last one. Kamui in front of Tokyo Tower was just...ohgod.

I loved. A lot. XD

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^^ Thank you! Kamui is such a brat, and I can just picture him and Doumeki getting into very quiet fights where Kamui glares at him and Doumeki is silent and very visibly Not Reacting To The Idiot. And Watanuki just standing there and looking smug.

I torture my characters. Too much. Any fandom that I haven't touched yet should thank the gods, because I can't do anything that is entirely happy. It's a character flaw.

Again, thank you!

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SO TRUE. And yet, Doumeki would never admit he was ever actually arguing. XP

(Haruka-san: "Oh, well, you know, when Shizuka pretends you don't exist he's really fighting with you, he just doesn't say that because it makes him look like a kid. *long drag of cig*"
Watanuki: "OMFWTFASDFGHJKL; WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME THIS BEFORE."
Haruka-san: "Teehee~*blows smoke rings*")

LOL, I can't write Haruka-san; he always comes out really girly. Or gay.

I torture my characters too. CLAMP chars seem to get it really bad, though, from me. Except Subaru. I can't torture Subaru, because he's been tortured way too much. In fact, I can only ever write Subaru crack. XDDDD

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Of course not. Because then he would lost the argument!

(Proof. I've always read this scene as Douemki-style revenge for Some random chick stole my soul in order to give you chocolate. And she stole the chocolate that you indirectly gave me. WTF.
And Doumeki doesn't have to know that gossiping about someone to their face is a third-grade tactic; what he doesn't know won't hurt him!)

... *narrows eyes* Subaru crack. Where is this, and why can I not find it. Give me crack! ... Uh... the written kind, please. The other kind might endanger my AP scores. (Took Calc AB Wednesday, taking APWH on Thursday.)

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Watanuki looks for help from Himawari-chan in vain. “I don’t like Subaru-san or Kamui-san like… like that, you weirdo!”

Doumeki's just checking Watanuki~ ;D

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Of course he is. XD What are friends for, right?

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Oh, so great, so funny, so good!! Of course Watanuki would end up being attacked by Kamui. He is a sort of monster-magnet, and anything potentially dangerous in hte vecinity was bound to decide he would look better with a few slashes across his body. I loved the thought of Doumeki and Watanuki piling the furniture against the door to keep the overprotective vampire out. XD

And Watanuki gaining a new stalker? and his stalkers fighting among themselves, to the point of completely ignoring Watanuki? Priceless.

Of course, the fact that the hilariously funny bits were insterspersed with punch-you-in-the-gut painful bits only made this even better.

Loved that Watanuki realized at the end he was lucky to have people he could be open with, and decided to make a good bento to thanks? repay? appreciate? them... and that Doumeki blew it all to hell by saying whatever it was he said about the nature of Watanuki's like towards the twins. XD