Feverbright 2/3

Aug 18, 2008 14:04

Right. It's been -- let's just say I've had the month from hell and leave it at that, yes?

Feverbright 2 )

feverbright, doumeki/watanuki, xxxholic, writing, fanfiction

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ellethill August 18 2008, 20:30:39 UTC
You have broken me silly and I love this to bits!!

Oh, do go on!!

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ichinonaru August 19 2008, 00:54:09 UTC
OMG! I Love how Watanuki found out about it! I mean, sigh Doumeki barging in like that.... he really should expect the consequences of all his sudden appearance... hahaha. I love how you made that scene so wonderfully real! I think you could actually incorporate it in canon and pass it off as a part of the manga... its sweet... very Watanuki-ish and Doumeki-ish and well, I hoped you would've described the kimono more heeehee, pretty Watanuki and leaving Doumeki speechless... YOU MADE MY DAY! I can't stop this stupid grin from breaking out and my sister is looking at me as if I'm weird but.. this is sooo cuuuuute! Waaaaai, I wanna see the next chapter soon!

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hitzusin August 19 2008, 01:46:46 UTC
I DEMAND A SEQUEL! Okay .. demand is probably too strong .. may I get on my knees and beg like a moron? :D xDDD <3 Loved this!

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wicked_liz August 19 2008, 06:08:05 UTC
KYA!!! <3

I'm such a sucker for "Watanuki-inherits-The-Shop" fic, and this one was clever and hilarious. XD

Doumeki trying to to stall what he thinks is going to be a Spazz attack, and Watanuki actually being kinda sweet (zomg!) was total win! Especially since Doumeki's inner narration is so much what I think goes through his mind when I read the manga.

So Much Love! <3

Fangirl Hive-Mind?

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knittedninja August 19 2008, 14:03:11 UTC
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

:wibbles:

You're doing such a good job with this! Can't wait for the next part!

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