Comments | eotteokhae: [2] Shoelaces

eotteokhae

[2] Shoelaces

Jan 24, 2009 02:39

Title: Shoelaces
Pairing: Key/Onew
Rating: PG
Genre: General/fluff
Word Count: 1974 WTFMATE?!

( “Hyung, my secret…requires you to close your eyes.” )

pairing: onew/key

Comments 41

brokenchariots January 25 2009, 04:51:34 UTC

AWESOME!! Love this! But there are some errors I spotted
1. It was hard to live in a dorm with five other boys and keep such an obvious secret. (should be 4 other boys?)
2. Jinki began fussing about the leader’s shoes. (should be Kibum~)
Other than that, perfect~

eotteokhae January 25 2009, 05:36:48 UTC

OMG. thank you so much for spotting those careless errors!
and for reading and enjoying it. :]

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eotteokhae January 25 2009, 05:37:26 UTC

lol have you ever seen that episode of YunHaNam? when they show his bed he has Eeyore at the head of his bead XD

thank you :]

mochafreeze January 25 2009, 05:46:28 UTC

This was so adorable and gahh ♥
I like how you write :D

eotteokhae January 25 2009, 06:26:11 UTC

glad to see you enjoyed it.
thank you for reading! :]

romanticgraze January 25 2009, 07:26:53 UTC

♥
Awesome twist! This fic is adorable~

eotteokhae January 25 2009, 07:56:14 UTC

it took me a redic amount of time to come up with the ending. i think i have a harder time writing non-angst XD
thanks for reading~

paperteuk January 25 2009, 09:33:04 UTC

LOOOOOOOOOOOOL. That was sooooo cute X3

eotteokhae January 25 2009, 19:45:27 UTC

glad you enjoyed it :]