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eotteokhae

[1] Pajamas

Jan 19, 2009 02:46

Title: Pajamas
Pairing: Key/Onew (Onew/Taemin, Jonghyun/Key)
Rating: PG
Genre: slight angst
Word Count: 743

( But while your body goes through the motions, your eyes are something akin to embers )

pairing: onew/key

Comments 33

dapdaphae January 20 2009, 05:49:07 UTC

While the noona is talking, he mouths to you, ‘Are you alright?’ and with narrowed eyes, he stares.

You nod, mouthing, ‘Just sad that this is the end.’

alsjdladk BUT KIMKEY. IT'S NOT FINE ;______;

you're so ridic, but i love you. keep on writing them, and maybe i'll end up liking them as much as i do jongyu (;

/secretlytriestobrainwashyouintowritingjongyujongyu 8D ♥

eotteokhae January 20 2009, 05:57:16 UTC

LOL. i thought you wanted me to write jaeho? :]

AND BY THE WAY I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU.

dapdaphae January 20 2009, 05:59:40 UTC

well, cries, i do want you to write jaeho/yoomin too.

BUT SHINEE!FIC WILL COME FIRST 8D

yeoboseyo January 20 2009, 06:27:17 UTC

I SAY YOOMIN

/biased

Thread 5

stardustii January 20 2009, 06:17:17 UTC

‘Ah! Gomawoyo!’

But just like that, your heart’s trapped once again. A flash of teeth, a sparkle of his eyes and your knees feel a familiar weakness. You feel your mouth foolishly grinning back.

And with that, the cycle continues.

SLKDFJLSKDJFSKLDJ!!!!!! omg this part mad me go all slkdjflksjdf.
you wrote so poetically ;_;
this is your first try? LIES.
i loved it!!!!

omg. sorry for all the spazzing.
._.
but. it. was. goooooooooooooooooood. <3

eotteokhae January 20 2009, 06:31:49 UTC

no! spazzing is highly encouraged!
thank you for spazzing!

and it really was my first time...thank you for your kind words tho :]

stardustii January 20 2009, 06:35:48 UTC

lol truthfully, this was the first SHINee fic I've read.

and i'm super glad i started off reading yours :3

eotteokhae January 20 2009, 06:38:55 UTC

welcome to the onkey fandom! :D

romanticgraze January 20 2009, 06:20:36 UTC

But just like that, your heart’s trapped once again. A flash of teeth, a sparkle of his eyes and your knees feel a familiar weakness. You feel your mouth foolishly grinning back.
♥

Keep writing! I love this!

eotteokhae January 20 2009, 06:32:37 UTC

thank you for your love! will do :]

yeoboseyo January 20 2009, 06:29:06 UTC

He’s flirtatious, clumsy, and undeserving of these pajamas that you kept for him.

Perfect. Perfect.

I really love how you're able to put so much into so few words. Ugh. You're amazing. Keep doing this, yeah?

eotteokhae January 20 2009, 06:33:34 UTC

YEAH. YOU GOT IT!

and by the way. HELLO! 8D

yeoboseyo January 20 2009, 06:36:59 UTC

GOOD!

Hiiii! ♥

theia88 January 20 2009, 06:55:00 UTC

Whoaaa! I like it! Whatever it was as long it was onkey i definetely like it! LOL

write more onkey, babe..i suggest you..hehe.. ^^

eotteokhae January 20 2009, 07:15:35 UTC

you got it :]

thank you!