I really like the subject matter, and I think you should just keep elaborating. I edited some stuff:
When I look back on the situation I think: How did I handle such a shocking truth? I remember initially crying in my room because I was jealous of the amount of attention my parents gave to my little twin sister. The feeling was much worse than jealousy, though; I didn’t fully understand why my life had to be changed all of a sudden, and so drastically. I was also angry with my parents for not telling me earlier that my sister was mentally handicapped. Then one day I was sitting in my room pouting because my parents had used all of their energy on Allison, and didn’t have the energy to read me a bedtime story, and realization hit me.
another oops! change this ***I think: How did I handle such a shocking truth?*** to this: I think: How did I handle the revelation of such a shocking truth?
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When I look back on the situation I think: How did I handle such a shocking truth? I remember initially crying in my room because I was jealous of the amount of attention my parents gave to my little twin sister. The feeling was much worse than jealousy, though; I didn’t fully understand why my life had to be changed all of a sudden, and so drastically. I was also angry with my parents for not telling me earlier that my sister was mentally handicapped. Then one day I was sitting in my room pouting because my parents had used all of their energy on Allison, and didn’t have the energy to read me a bedtime story, and realization hit me.
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actually, either way is okay, so you pick
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