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[ephemerita]

I wrote another poem! I actually worked on this one over a few days. Whether it was worth it, well... you be the judge

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[msstacy13]

This is a promising development.

[aumentou]

I really like this poem. It's pretty and whimsical.

[ephemerita]

Thank you! A lot :) It's almost a proper sonnet, with a volta and everything! Except the final couplet is a pair of internet memes.

There are no dinosaurs in it at all. I am pleased with my restraint.

[aumentou]

Now I have a vision of people trying to restrain dinosaurs, while reciting dinosaur poetry. Lots of "Raar!" in there.

Oh well. At least it's not as bad as earlier, when I could see chubby dragons with vestigial wings using hot air balloons to get themselves around... powered by their own breath, obviously.

[allieflowlight]

This was fun!

[ephemerita]

Glad you thought so :)

[rachel2205]

This is lots of fun, particularly:

I'll dress in antic black and call
my fun all post-modernity.

Nicely done!