heliograph

[ephemerita]

~ poetry, in draft rough as wire

Comments

[msstacy13]

If you're open to suggestion,
try either expanding it to a sestina
or compressing it to a triolet.

Unless you're thinking of it as song lyrics.

[rozk]

You should certainly perform this - whether in this version or a later one. It's raw and real and you should face the fear.

[__oh_that_girl]

I really like this. I'm with Roz, I think you should perform it. Totally up to you though babes xx