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Nov 16, 2011 20:15

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ace_p November 17 2011, 21:37:13 UTC
That was such a cute and great story.
I really liked the way you told it.

I loved how smart Jared was, and saw what Jensen himself didn't want to see.
And that you didn't make Jensen "save" Jared, but that he did it himself.
(and I guess Jensen had some "saving" to do of his own really...)

Thanks so much for sharing this!
Cheers! :)

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epicallytired November 17 2011, 21:44:17 UTC
Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. I'm not big on people being "saved" so much as finding a reason to save themselves, and in this one they both really needed some saving, you're right.

:D

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ace_p November 17 2011, 21:56:49 UTC
I totally agree. A lot of stories, though, shows one of them "saving" the other,
and it's nice to finally see someone who shares my POV on this...hehe! ;)

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epicallytired November 17 2011, 22:00:39 UTC
yeah, I have a slightly different take on H/C than some, but hey, a lot of people seem to like those other fics. Not my style but I have been known to write slightly more clearcut H/C most of it's on my masterlist. [shrug]

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danaid_luv November 17 2011, 22:50:34 UTC
Weirdest thing. Just tried to comment & it tagged it 'anonymous' & made me jump the hoops. Ptth.
. . .
Wow. I'm tired & feeling a little out of sorts; that's where I'm pinning my near-sniffling & heavy weight from reading ;) I loved it. It wasn't shiny or pretty & wasn't wrapped up in the span of a week--those two boys *suffered* in their own ways & I like how you didn't have Jensen Save The Day. You actually made him walk away.

Anyway, it was heavy, but I'm glad I had a chance to read it. Thanks.

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epicallytired November 17 2011, 22:54:25 UTC
Sorry about the tired/out of sorts thing.

I got stuck halfway through this fic and that's when I realized that Jensen HAD to walk away, that these two men, in their current state could not be together.

I'm glad you liked it. I know it's not the typical J2 romance, but they end up better for the time it takes them to pull themselves together, you know?

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shenova November 17 2011, 23:26:45 UTC
Loved it. Jensen seemed so sad and frustered with his job and Jared cam around at a time he needed someone. They needed each other and in the end they got that. Jensen did the right thing in leaving so he could do what he wanted and maybe Jared would sort things out and he did. Brilliant.

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epicallytired November 17 2011, 23:30:50 UTC
Thanks.

Yeah, Jensen was hitting a wall at work, burning out and their relationship forced them both to really look at their choices and what options were closed off to them because of those choices and in the end, they saved themselves so they could be together.

I'm glad you liked it.

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zara_zee November 18 2011, 00:12:25 UTC
Enjoyed this. Believable and satisfying.

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epicallytired November 18 2011, 00:16:08 UTC
thanks.

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anniespinkhouse November 18 2011, 02:02:47 UTC
This is lovely , it had a hard realistic edge. That they both had to walk away and make changes for themselves before they could make it work together was angsty in a good way.

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epicallytired November 18 2011, 02:07:19 UTC
thank you, I'm so glad you liked it.

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