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[petitebelette]

a lover’s alibi - chapter nine
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Gabriel/Elle
Authors: superkappa and petitebelette
Summary: Elle decides to tell Gabriel the truth and stay with him instead of betraying him. Chapter Nine: more stuff happens~
Author’s Note: This is the epic that we’ve been working on/talking about for a while now based on our RPs. Beta'ed by mollivanders, who owns the universe

Comments

[catyuy]

Love how this is moving along now.

[petitebelette]

Thank you! :D

[disalae]

I really want the fact that she totally denied him and then held "balls of cyan" in her hand to have been intentional. If it wasn't...well, that's awesome too.

As for the actual story, well, obviously I love it. I like how you're tying it into the story itself, which I think is an interesting way of looking at how Heroes is always trying to "change the future." This story, though different, progresses very much in the way the canon story does, something I enjoy in fanfics (referencing the actual source material effectively, to be specific). Also, the perv in me wants to comment that the almost-sex was pretty awesome too.

[petitebelette]

It took me a moment to understand what you meant. AND THEN I GIGGLED SO HARD. Oh god, it wasn't intentional. But from now on I'm saying it was LOL.

Thank you! For your thoughts and your pervy thoughts, haha. Staying with the canon becomes a trend with this fic some more, too. :D

[disalae]

You all obviously underestimate my middle school sense of humor and ability to make everything dirty. You're welcome ;)

[petitebelette]

LOL Katie and I laughed about this for a good 5 minutes. We recognize we all are like 12. ;)

[sarah_1228]

ooohhh :) very interesting chapter :D

[petitebelette]

:D TY

icon twins~

[sarah_1228]

icon twins are &hearts hehe

[petitebelette]

I was disappointed with her, too. BUT SHE WAS LIKE "UHM CRYSTAL, I AM NOT HAVING SEX WITH HIM YET. WHAT KIND OF SADISTIC BITCH DO YOU THINK I AM." I couldn't disagree with her. She would have fried me.

:D ty bb