stolen off
with-a-kay, because i'm a glutton for punishment, and because this lecture is boring.
SO THE MEME:
YOU pick a scene from one of my fics that you want to see from another character's perspective. I write it! (example: that scene in still standing where cook manhandles archie in the toilet from archie's/jcas'/syesha's pov.)
there are some things a father knows about his children. things like their friends, what they want to do after high school, and whether they're engaging in underage sex. granted, the things a father needs to know about a son with superpowers is a little different: he needs to know whether the cape fits, if there's ever any media at a crime scene, if the side effects of using those powers is too much to handle.
but in none of those circumstances is how a child sounds after they witness a gunshot - multiple gunshots - one of those things.
jeff's fingers are white-knuckled where they're curled around the table edge, and his other hand is pressed to his earpiece. a woman in screaming in the distance. "david," he says, urgently. "david."
there's another second of static-filled silence, and then david says, dully, "i'm okay."
"david--"
"dad." david's voice crackles over the line. "i don't - i tried to make him stop ( ... )
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OH MY GODDDD NATALIE
you! you honest-to-god get it, how jeff can let go of his son who can do wonderful and powerful things, but when it comes to things like guns and realizing that your son is still just a kid, your precious kid, i mean, ohmygod i am rambling, (flails)
I WISH EVERYONE WHO EVER WRITES JEFF (and the rest of David's family) HAS THIS STORY PINNED TO THEIR FINGERS. I WILL PERSONALLY STAPLE THIS MYSELF.
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS ♥♥
this comment inadequately expresses how i feel right now, for you and for this slice of sheer brilliance :c
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you are too good to me! i am so glad you liked it!
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BEST REQUEST EVER
AND BEST RESPONSE EVER
I LOVE YOU MORE THAN LIFE.
I teared up, ngl, it was amazing Nat. OH JEFF. OH DAVID. OH BRI. ♥
HEARTBREAKING AND AMAZING AND ILU
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your request is TOTALLY COMING SOON, TOO! i promise! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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