more memes!

Jan 19, 2009 11:12

stolen off with-a-kay, because i'm a glutton for punishment, and because this lecture is boring.

SO THE MEME:

YOU pick a scene from one of my fics that you want to see from another character's perspective. I write it! (example: that scene in still standing where cook manhandles archie in the toilet from archie's/jcas'/syesha's pov.)

scribble scrabble, i r lemming

Leave a comment

oh my gosh, where did this sudden angst!fest come from? epicflailer January 20 2009, 09:34:06 UTC
uh. somehow this isn't what i had in mind when i started working on it. ack. i'm sorry!

there are some things a father knows about his children. things like their friends, what they want to do after high school, and whether they're engaging in underage sex. granted, the things a father needs to know about a son with superpowers is a little different: he needs to know whether the cape fits, if there's ever any media at a crime scene, if the side effects of using those powers is too much to handle.

but in none of those circumstances is how a child sounds after they witness a gunshot - multiple gunshots - one of those things.

jeff's fingers are white-knuckled where they're curled around the table edge, and his other hand is pressed to his earpiece. a woman in screaming in the distance. "david," he says, urgently. "david."

there's another second of static-filled silence, and then david says, dully, "i'm okay."

"david--"

"dad." david's voice crackles over the line. "i don't - i tried to make him stop ( ... )

Reply

Re: oh my gosh, where did this sudden angst!fest come from? ciudad January 20 2009, 09:47:58 UTC
/HAND TO MOUTH

OH MY GODDDD NATALIE

you! you honest-to-god get it, how jeff can let go of his son who can do wonderful and powerful things, but when it comes to things like guns and realizing that your son is still just a kid, your precious kid, i mean, ohmygod i am rambling, (flails)

I WISH EVERYONE WHO EVER WRITES JEFF (and the rest of David's family) HAS THIS STORY PINNED TO THEIR FINGERS. I WILL PERSONALLY STAPLE THIS MYSELF.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS ♥♥

this comment inadequately expresses how i feel right now, for you and for this slice of sheer brilliance :c

Reply

Re: oh my gosh, where did this sudden angst!fest come from? epicflailer January 20 2009, 10:02:06 UTC
OMG! this is such high praise, and coming from YOU, OMG. i am so thrilled and so, so FLATTERED, I DON'T DESERVE ALL THIS RAMBLING AND STAPLING BUSINESS. *flails!*

you are too good to me! i am so glad you liked it!

Reply

Re: oh my gosh, where did this sudden angst!fest come from? snackbreak January 20 2009, 21:46:24 UTC
OH MY GOD.

BEST REQUEST EVER

AND BEST RESPONSE EVER

I LOVE YOU MORE THAN LIFE.

I teared up, ngl, it was amazing Nat. OH JEFF. OH DAVID. OH BRI. ♥

HEARTBREAKING AND AMAZING AND ILU

Reply

Re: oh my gosh, where did this sudden angst!fest come from? epicflailer January 21 2009, 13:55:45 UTC
OMG KIM. YOU ARE TOO GOOD TO ME, IDEK. I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS, EVEN THOUGH IT WAS ALL ANGSTY AND DRAMA-LIKE AND WHATEVER.

your request is TOTALLY COMING SOON, TOO! i promise! <333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

Reply


Leave a comment

Up