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Aug 20, 2006 21:57

Epico - A Sorta Fairytale: Chapter Twenty-One

Authors: CJ [vylentcrymz], Emilie [emilierevan], Jen [savvy_elf] and Stacy [seemedsobright].

Rating: R

Pairings: Dominic Monaghan/Emilie de Ravin, Ian Somerhalder/Maggie Grace, Orlando Bloom/Evangeline Lilly

Summary: Love. Friendship. Growth. Sex. Change. Drama. But mostly just sex. Sure, we have a plot… somewhere around here (now where did I ( Read more... )

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thisisironic August 21 2006, 05:49:14 UTC
I do feel evil but for the first time, I actually feel bad about it.

And I think if this happened to any of the pairings, it would've been just as sucky. And in a sense, it did happen to Magsian, though it wasn't as drawn out. Ian just got a little carried away (in that adorable way of his) and Maggie had to break the bad news to him. It hurts just thinking about how Emilie's going to tell Dom. The look of joy on his face at finding out he was going to be a father contrasting with the look on his face when he finds out that he actually isn't is just...ugh.

And the reason you're damning us (and complimenting us at the same time) is exactly what we were shooting for in this chapter. If it was serious all the way through, focusing on the test and building up to it in such an obvious manner, I honestly don't think it have such a *PUNCHES YOU IN THE GUT* kind of effect, you know? Emilie, after telling Dom, was just so happy and she was off to go shopping with her best bud and BAM! It's all gone ( ... )

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spread_the_fun August 21 2006, 05:44:22 UTC
:(

JUST BECAUSE I KNEW IT WAS COMING DOESN'T MEAN I'M NOT SAD.

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the correct way to say things thisisironic August 21 2006, 05:51:19 UTC
AND JUST BECAUSE WE WROTE THE DAMN THING DOESN'T MEAN WE'RE NOT ALSO SAD AND THINKING "WHY ARE WE BEING SO MEAN TO THESE CHARACTERS?"

*comforts you*

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Re: the correct way to say things spread_the_fun August 21 2006, 05:55:16 UTC
*sniffs and comforts you back*

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Re: the correct way to say things spread_the_fun August 21 2006, 05:56:31 UTC
Heh, wanna know something funny in a sort of ironic way? Mom always though Emilie looked pregnant when she came back in episode 15. It was something about her profile that made it look more...believable...or something.

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sapphire_child August 21 2006, 05:56:18 UTC
ASDFHJKL!!!11!!!!!!!!!!1!

NEGATIVE?!

And here was me about to log off...

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caffrey August 21 2006, 12:50:15 UTC
ASDFHJKL!!!11!!!!!!!!!!!!1!

YES IT IS!

:(

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watchasifall August 21 2006, 06:14:11 UTC
;_;

!!!! ???

OMG NOOOOO!!! *cries* But... they were so happy... omg no *cries*

They way you managed to turn it around was soo amazing. You done such a great build up of everything being so happy, and fluffy and then just... omg.

Throughout the whole fic I was like "squee!heheheh!" and grinning like an idiot, and then I read the last two parapraphs and I was like "=O!!" Evil I tell you, evil!

Oh, and Dom's reaction was absolutely perfect, he was *so* happy and now... Sorry I just can't get over what happened...

Gah. Like Mic said this totally pwns Lost cliffhangers ;)

More now plzkthnx!

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caffrey August 21 2006, 12:55:13 UTC
Gosh Lozz... your feedback is always appreciated. I love seeing comments like these, hee.

We're going to enjoy having to write Dom finding out.

*sighs*

Everything happens for a reason.

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caffrey August 21 2006, 12:51:57 UTC
We thought you guys'd notice or realise that Kayla Bloom is older than Abby and Billie Monaghan... but alas. Many of you were too distracted with squeeage, XD.

If it means anything to you, we don't enjoy doing this to them.

*whimpers*

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