Comments | equinox_blue: Engulfed, Tangled, Together

equinox_blue

Engulfed, Tangled, Together

Aug 12, 2008 16:11

Title: Engulfed, Tangled, Together
Rating: PG-13 for sexual situations
Genre: Romance
Characters/Pairings: Jasper/Alice
Spoilers: Slight Eclipse
Summary: Their first night together they realize this is forever.
Disclaimer: Everything Twilight related belongs to Stephanie Meyer, and is used without permission here. I, however, do not claim what is ( Read more... )

character: jasper hale, twilight20, fanfiction, pairing: jasper/alice, twilight

Comments 45

nebakanezer August 13 2008, 08:17:57 UTC

Very nicely done. Loved this part: “I was writing ‘I love you’ in all the languages I could think of on your skin,” :)

equinox_blue August 13 2008, 20:01:58 UTC

Thank you so much! That was one of my favorite lines as soon as I wrote it. :)

keeper_of_stars August 13 2008, 21:04:09 UTC

That was really sweet. Nice job. :D

equinox_blue August 14 2008, 15:05:25 UTC

Aw, thank you! Glad you liked it! :)

kudosirony August 13 2008, 21:27:22 UTC

Aww...yay Jasper! They're too cute.

equinox_blue August 14 2008, 15:05:57 UTC

Alice and Jasper are always adorable! Thanks for the review!

fantasium August 13 2008, 22:17:32 UTC

This was very, very nice; I'm glad we got to see Jasper through... different eyes, so to speak, in Breaking Dawn, and it makes complete sense for him to be a little self-conscious about his scars. Not out of vanity, I wouldn't think, but because he'd know how other vampires would perceive him because of it. But Alice makes everything right, doesn't she? Ah, yes, thank you for sharing this! :D

equinox_blue August 14 2008, 15:08:30 UTC

Well, to be honest, I haven't yet read Breaking Dawn. But I'm glad that this was (accidentally!) consistent! But I figured Jasper, as always the quiet one, had to be more self-conscious about himself because of his scars... the comforting!Alice wrote herself, honestly. :) Thank you for the comment!

fantasium August 14 2008, 21:24:44 UTC

Phew, I'm glad I was rather vague in my comment then - I really hope I didn't spoil anything for you. =)

equinox_blue August 15 2008, 03:29:26 UTC

Lulz. Nothing I hadn't already heard and/or read. One of my close friends read it...and pretty much told me everything, so no worries! :)

anonymous August 14 2008, 03:57:17 UTC

Very Awesome. Great Job. I wish Stephenie Meyer will come out with a book on Jasper and Alice. This story definitely hits the spot though. Thank you!

equinox_blue August 14 2008, 15:10:00 UTC

Lol, that would be awesome, cuz Jasper is too badass! :) Glad you liked it!