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equinox_blue

Yellow Leaves Fallin' on Summer Romance

Nov 14, 2007 19:49

Title: Yellow Leaves Fallin' on Summer Romance
Rating: PG-13 for sexual situations, language
Characters/Pairings: James/Lily, Petunia
Genre: Romance, fluff
Spoilers: None
Summary: It's been one summer too long, so they'll run away.
Disclaimers: Everything Harry Potter belongs to J.K. Rowling and Scholastic Press and is used without their permission ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing: james/lily, harry potter

Comments 6

pokie4389 November 15 2007, 06:46:31 UTC

So cute! Loved it!

equinox_blue November 15 2007, 19:03:33 UTC

*grin* Thank you!

pixel_0 November 22 2007, 20:27:39 UTC

*slips you dentist bill*

;D

Okay, so it really is very well written. And it's cute. And fluffy. And yeah. I suppose it'd help if I knew the characters well enough to flail and squee over them, but hey, you gotta cut me some slack somewhere--right? ;)

Excellent job, m'dear. :)

equinox_blue November 22 2007, 23:36:58 UTC

Oh sure. You're just saying that so I'll beta whatever you're going to throw at me next. I see how it is. :P

Thanks for the review! :D

norisis November 26 2007, 11:28:10 UTC

Here via lily_james!

That was really sweet - makes me nostalgic for summer, certainly! The racy bits were really well done, I have to say - very hot. ;)

This was a nice little piece, thanks for sharing! Always good to see some James/Lily love in fandom, especially now that Snape/Lily seems to have skyrocketed in popularity. *g* Just one little quibble, though, and I hope you don't mind me asking - is it possible for a wizard to Disapparate while seated? On a tree or otherwise. I was under the impression that they have to do some sort of half-turn.

equinox_blue November 27 2007, 00:18:30 UTC

Aw, thanks. This was the first time I've ever really posted anything that...um, provocative. *bites nails*

Lol. I'm a pretty big James/Lily 'shipper (not rabid, I promise :D), and I never really liked Snape/Lily. James and Lily are true love forever! :D

I did consider the Disapparation problem...the turning thing and all, but for literary sake, I sort of ignored it. I think that to Disapparate/Apparate, it's best to turn and do it, but I think if the wizard is skilled enough, he or she can just pop in and out. I'm not real sure, that's just the feeling I got. *shrugs*

Thanks for commenting! :D