[fanfic] APH: "REVENANT" (chapter 3)

[eram_quod_es]

Title: REVENANT
Author: Eram_Quod_Es
Warnings: AU, slight OOC-ness in the beginning, language, probably confusing content, an almost unacceptable lack of Alfred in this chapter
Summary: "So I will destroy the gods." Everything changed when Ivan began his new life alone in an unfamiliar city. When the Fae strike and a contract is formed with the

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[stolt_idiot]

Ah, I've been looking forward (is it forward or "foward"? I've never been sure of the spelling) to this! :D

This was a really good chapter <3. You really are a wonderful writer...I know I've said it before, but I can't stop myself from saying it again and again. Both your style and you language is really terrific!

I'm not confused, so I don't need any explanations (so far) ^-^.

"I’ll be turning 19 on July 21st."

...this reminds me of how young all of my lj friends are, and how old I must be in your eyes XD. Anyway, to bad I can't give your presents before your birthday. I'm really sorry >.<.

[eram_quod_es]

XD It's 'forward.' You were right. XD The word I always get confused on is 'father' and 'farther,' two completely different things. XD

I'm glad the chapter was okay. :) I was a bit unsure of the quality, because I wrote it all in one night. >< I feel really rusty, because all I've been thinking about is facts for anatomy. XD I'm really concerned with how boring it is so far. XD It makes me worry about whether or not I'll be capable of writing action scenes. >I've been contemplating taking an introduction to fiction writing course for the fall semester, but I don't know...it might help me improve, or it could completely overload my schedule

[stolt_idiot]

Thanks, now I finally know XD.

Not OK, GOOD. Boring?! I don't think it is at all. But I guess we both are very harsh with the things we create (you know, most of the time you sound like a cursed prefectionist like I am). I think you did a good work ^-^.

"I've been contemplating taking an introduction to fiction writing course for the fall semester, but I don't know...it might help me improve, or it could completely overload my schedule."

That sounds very interesting! (not that i think you need it though XD). But maybe you should wait before you decide then?

Haha, I'm 23 XD. 25 isn't very old, but then again, I call and feel old myself XD.

Aw don't worry ^-^. I just think it's so very nice of you that you even bought those things to begin with! <3.

[eram_quod_es]

XD Okay, okay! Yeesh! What an optimist! XD I just...can't really explain it. Like, I think of other people's writing, and wonder how they would approach the plot. By now, I'm sure they would have gotten to a major plot point right now, or at least not spend so much time blathering on about mundane stuff. I end up trying to explain aspects of the world, which is an approach I would use in original fiction writing in order to create a sense of atmosphere for the world...I end up writing, and then I think about how Ivan would react to spoiled food, where he would put it and such, and how they would shop. It's a strained society, so everything must be conserved. >< I end up thinking of that more than the magical aspects. XD

^.^

[zooswho]

Yay~ an update. I just enjoy this story so much. It's dark and kinda creepy, with magic. I love it ^-^

Re: ^.^

[eram_quod_es]

XD Thank you! I figure I could have probably entered this story into any of the last three categories of the Fantasia event. XD It is modern, epically long, and kinda sorta maybe dark, and will probably get darker, if I manage to write things correctly.

I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. :)