Le Gasp! Une histoire originale?! Impossible!

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So I had this idea for a longer story (FIRST ONE THAT I WILL COMPLETE. I'll force myself to.) And here is a character sketch...well sort of two characters in one.

Thoughts wanted really badly. Critique would be ♥

He kicks the air, oxygen atoms and hydrogen and nitrogen scattering, creating a whistling sound. Another kick follows immediately after,

Comments

[edbreadkid11]

haha, lena reminds me of the girl from scooby doo zombie island!
some gyspy cat woman from the swamps!
interesting names. alouette?
bunkai. did you have to? *-*
go post this in some community, like... fictionwriters or something.
no one looks at their friends page anymore.
also, my stomach is heaving at all that boarding school crap.

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I did post it somewhere else. But instead of linking it to my journal, i posted in the comm. It's here for archiving purposes.

Scooby doo...UGH D:

Stomach heaving. Why?

[edbreadkid11]

oh
i never do that.
hey, i have come to accept that im not making any lj buddies
its ok
and my stomach is heaving because i dont have the grades for a full scholarship, and my mom says that thats the only way i can get in there.
i'll have to wait till school so i can talk to the counselor about it.
dude, scooby doo is the shit.

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I usually don't, but these comms aren't quite like my normal/casual/happy-go-lucky fangirling comms. D:

What kinda grades do you need?

We will not debate on scooby doo.

[shikanashi_kk]

You make me fall in love with your writing. D: D: The descriptions are so lovely *A* Not too much, not too descriptive, and everything's just flowy. :) SORRY, MY GEEKNESS IS SHOWING THROUGH. XD;

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♥ & hearts;
Your comments always makes me feel like the best writer in the world. :)

AND MY GEEKINESS SHOWS MORE. :DDD