8059: The First Time Edition

Sep 07, 2008 13:33

Ha. Not the first time, but my first time writing these two, lovely snarky awesome boys. <3 OH MY GOD DON'T LET ME KILL THEM D:

Title: ...(I'll figure it out one day soon)
Summary: Burnout is to be expected among assassins, but it's starting to affect Yamamoto's missions too. Maybe if he would just stop thinking about it, it'll go away.
Rating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

fic, khr, ficlet

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pistachio_queen November 19 2008, 04:46:42 UTC
Nice job :) enjoyed reading it. Only critique I can think of is you used both 'with' and 'using' in "lunch and blew them up with using pipe bombs?.” (I liked the intent of that line though xD)
And for the record, they didn't seem out of character to me haha

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erase_away November 19 2008, 22:55:06 UTC
OH DEAR GOD. HOW DID I MISS THAT? D: this is what editing is for...
Thank you for pointing that out >.< I'll fix it.

and thanks for reading. :)

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