ill tell you i love you if you just go away

[erasestatelines]

there was a girl once who fell in love without warning just to fall back apart. this girl didnt rush into anything. she was careful and strong. no guy stood still to her constant tests and quizes of the mind they never understood. she never cryed, and never felt like dying. the day she would fall apart would be the day her drunken father would

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[areyouhip]

did you right that?

[erasestatelines]

yes

[amour_e_odio]

its beautiful. as is everything else you write. why does that story remind me of u and other ... <3

poor thing

[anonymous]

I think the thing that gets hurt the most is the cat after you throw it against the wall because you're so mad :)

[shayshayheyhey]

juliiiie..its so good:) my lill' poet, ehhe. that was sad too. like, i felt all sad after i reda it, but in a good wway, ahha if that makes sence, excelent job htough i love it..im gunan reda the rest of your thingys now!