Chapter One of "I Knew Him"

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Comments

[emeraldsedai]

That's gorgeous! Your Jazz Age dialogue feels authentic and has a wonderful cadence and motion, and I love how you've set up the plot.

Congrats, too, on the lovely, lovely cover art! I just picked up the Kindle edition and am looking forward to reading it.

[clarelondon]

So sorry, that last comment was me, I didn't realise I wasn't logged in :)