the fall

[sgmajorshipper]

Title: the fall
Original text(s) erased: Once in a Lifetime
Erased by: sgmajorshipper
Original text by: switchbladesis
Fandom (of original text): Supernatural
Fandom (of erasure): Supernatural
Notes: This is my first erasure, so I hope I did the awesomeness of the genre justice. It's short, but hopefully gets the point across. I only took the first portion of the original fic and

Comments

[switchbladesis]

Ooh, this is really interesting. I like the subject shift from the original-how you managed to keep so much of the text but clearly shift the meaning.

[sgmajorshipper]

Thank you! I wanted to do something unique, and I have to say, I was struggling for a while about how to make your fantastic stories into something equally as good. But there was just so much good stuff in there to use, I couldn't give up. And so this came out. :)