erasure: a hole cut inside

[ienablu]

Title: a hole cut inside
Original text(s) erased: One ( link)
Erased by: ienablu
Original text by: grim_lupine
Fandom (of original text): X-Men: First Class
Fandom (of erasure): not specific
Notes: Sorry for the late posting, I accidentally wrote down the wrong final date. It's a touch short, but that's just because I like shorter poetry.

Comments

[sgmajorshipper]

Oh, wow, this is so very pretty. And I love the style you took with it. And the graphic is just <3

[alias_sqbr]

Very nice! I really like the poem, and the aesthetics, and the way the two fit together. The way you have both literal and metaphorical holes is very clever.

[zempasuchil]

OOOOO THIS IS AWESOME. It's not only pretty, you've done some really sweet stuff connecting the imagery (even as simple as the shapes are) to the text with a hole cut inside his head. I like, a lot :D

[xenoamorist]

Oh God, this is gorgeous and amazing. The art is creative and beautiful, and the text is great is well. Fabulous job :)

[alice_pike]

Whaaaattt. This is flippin' awesome.