Since I was MIA this weekend and missed out on the beta, here's a bit of running commentary.
“That you’re doing McKay? Some, I guess. Why?” Hee!
“I think about them, too,” he said instead. LOL. Poor John. At least his mouth knows what's going on, even if his brain doesn't.
He felt like he couldn't stand it, couldn't give up what had never existed outside his own imagination. Oh! Oh. That's so...oh John.
which earned him the stubborn little chin tilt. God, I love that chin tilt. It's the essence of McKay.
And finally...Rodney face crumpled. “Don’t do this to me,” he said. “I just broke up with my girlfriend for you.”
And just that quickly, John found the glare sliding off his face. He was feeling a little bit, no, a whole lot better. “You what?”
“I broke up with Katie, you moron. What was all that talk about blowjobs for anyway? Was that a joke?”
“No, Rodney, no, it wasn’t a joke.” He was off the bed and impulsively pulling Rodney into him before he’d finished speaking. AWW. And EEE! And so much ♥
Cure For Insomnia - storymaxinemayerFebruary 27 2008, 15:08:24 UTC
I loved this! I know "Quarantine" "jossed" (where did fandom *get* that word???) this a bit but I still think it (your story) is a perfectly logical outcome to "Miller's Crossing." It's so clear that John is in love with Rodney; also, that Rodney probably doesn't know that he himself is in love with John. But when this happens, Rodney's quick enough in the head to get it, to get the meaning behind the comfort of sleeping together, of being happy and relaxed and at home and at peace in each other's company. Rodney's no fool.
Also, I just love your descriptions and your dialog. You rock!
Thank you for sharing this story. And what I said about sga_episodefic posting still stands.... Love, max
Re: Cure For Insomnia - storyerda_3February 28 2008, 02:39:25 UTC
The term "Jossed" comes from Joss Whedon, the man responsible for Buffy the Vampire Slayer, because all the unexpected plot twists on Buffy were constantly messing up fanfiction. I love spending time on UrbanDictionary.com filling my head with ridiculous slang terms. Sweet comments. Thank you.
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“That you’re doing McKay? Some, I guess. Why?” Hee!
“I think about them, too,” he said instead. LOL. Poor John. At least his mouth knows what's going on, even if his brain doesn't.
He felt like he couldn't stand it, couldn't give up what had never existed outside his own imagination. Oh! Oh. That's so...oh John.
which earned him the stubborn little chin tilt. God, I love that chin tilt. It's the essence of McKay.
And finally...Rodney face crumpled. “Don’t do this to me,” he said. “I just broke up with my girlfriend for you.”
And just that quickly, John found the glare sliding off his face. He was feeling a little bit, no, a whole lot better. “You what?”
“I broke up with Katie, you moron. What was all that talk about blowjobs for anyway? Was that a joke?”
“No, Rodney, no, it wasn’t a joke.” He was off the bed and impulsively pulling Rodney into him before he’d finished speaking. AWW. And EEE! And so much ♥
Really enjoyed this! Well
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I don't understand why you feel so entitled to have a real life all the time.
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Also, I just love your descriptions and your dialog. You rock!
Thank you for sharing this story. And what I said about sga_episodefic posting still stands....
Love, max
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Love, max
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