whispers that transcend walls

[erethesunrises]

whispers that transcend walls
mr. gold/belle (once upon a time); pg-13
~1,200 words
Sometimes she would cry without realizing it, wake up with a dying scream upon her lips. Other times she would feel nothing at all. He would disappear and reappear and she’d idly wonder if those hands belonged to him. She would trace her fingers over her thigh and

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[sakuraberries]

oh, this is lovely. I love the way you broke it up between Gold and Belle's thoughts; very clever and really lends the story power.

All this makes me wonder what Belle's state of mind will be when she gets out of that mental institution and what Gold's reaction will be if he sees her.

Oh, and this:

Sometimes she would cry without realizing it, wake up with a dying scream upon her lips. Other times she would feel nothing at all. He would disappear and reappear and she’d idly wonder if those hands belonged to him. She would trace her fingers over her thigh and imagine it was him, whoever he was; she must have known long ago, she was sure she must have.

Is my favourite paragraph ever.

[erethesunrises]

omgosh Addie you are always just the sweetest. dfkjhgfdj thank you so much! ♥

Seriously, the thing I'm mostly looking forward to in the show right now is for Gold to find out Belle's in Storybrooke and not dead. I have so many things I want him to do when this is revealed to him. Mostly I just want him to experience all the feelings.

[obisgirl]

I love the way you broke up Belle's/Mr.Gold's stream of consciousness. excellent fic!

[lovelysolitude]

ANYA MY CREEEEEEEEEEYS OMG HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME GUUUUH I WILL SINK WITH THIS SHIP. It's comforting to know you will too! BUT OMG ANYA. THIS FIC. Just. How do you do words.

[lovelysolitude]

But um, for a try at coherency, perhaps? Okay, I loved the style in which you wrote this. Obviously we spoke about it a bit on skype, but seeing the whole fic together with the different cuts from Belle to Gold made it much clearer. It's a fab writing device, especially for what you're putting across here. Speaking of: my heeeeeeeeeeeeeart. OMG ANYA. This is so lovely and heartbreaking and guh. Fantastic job, bb. <3

[erethesunrises]

ANNA YOU GIVE ME ALL THE FEELS. And I'm so glad we can flail about this together and have each other to lean on BECAUSE I KNOW I COULDN'T DO THIS ON MY OWN. dfjhghdjfg thank you so much bb omg ilu. ♥

[lovelysolitude]

RIGHT RIGHT RIGHT? Omgsh ilu5everrrrrrrrrrr ♥♥♥♥

[erethesunrises]

Oh, thank you!

[zombres]

ANYA.

ANYA.

ANYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.

HOW.

DARE

YOU.

HOW DARE YOU WRITE THIS AND GIVE ME A WHOLE NOTHER WAVE OF FEELINGS? UGH, THE WAY YOU ALTERNATED BETWEEN THEIR PERSPECTIVES, THE LAST BIT RUNNING BACK AND FORTH SO QUICKLY, HER HOLDING ONTO HOPE AND HIM TRYING TO PUSH IT AWAY AND AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

I LOVE YOU, MARRY ME, LET'S ADOPT A DOZEN BABIES AND NAME THEM AFTER FAIRY TALE FIGURES.

[erethesunrises]

I'M SORRY ANGIE I JUST HAD TO GET OUT ALL MY FEELINGS SOMEHOW. AND SUDDENLY THIS IS ALL I'M THINKING OF AND JUST WANT TO WRITE ALL THE FIC.

HOWEVER I AM TOTALLY OKAY WITH THIS PLAN. MARRYING YOU IS LIKE A DREAM COME TRUE~

[tardis_mafia]

Very lovely fic. I ache for these two to be together, and this was beautifully orchestrated. Great job. :)

[erethesunrises]

Thank you so much! I ache for it as well!