there's a beauty in walking away

[erethesunrises]

there's a beauty in walking away
mr. gold/belle (once upon a time); pg-13
~3,800 words

“Mr. Gold.” Belle speaks hoarsely, her eyes trained on his photo. She considers for a moment. She nods. “I don’t think I want anything to do with him.”

notes: can't stop, won't stop. thanks to the wonderful skypirateb for reading it over despite not being as into the

Comments

[seren_ccd]

Well, clearly you must never stop writing these two. Clearly.

This is lovely and heartbreaking and then lovely all over again.

[erethesunrises]

dfhjgjfd well then maybe I won't. I want to try my hand at something ridiculously fluffy next, I just need an idea to start from.

Thank you so much. <3

[hey_doey_doey]

This was wonderful. So heartbreaking, with the perfect amount of hope at the end. :)

[erethesunrises]

Thank you so much! I was torn on the ending but ultimately I just had to give it some hope.

[lita64]

AHHH! THAT WAS JUST...PERFECT.

I'm dead serious. Your writing style is fabulous and the characterization was SO spot on. This is exactly how things need to play out on the show! :D

[erethesunrises]

dkfjghkjfdg you are seriously too sweet and oh gosh, it's overwhelming! ♥

[sunnytyler001]

AMAZING!!! :) I LOVE it :)
If you don't mind, I'll friend you, so I can follow your amazing work, without missing a chapter :)

[erethesunrises]

Of course not, go right ahead! :D

[mscaitlinpotter]

Time escaped me but I've finally had the chance to read it. B'aw. <3 (The only thing off to me was when Gold went to Regina with questions and she said she wasn't in an answering mood . . . but he didn't just ask with a please? I feel like he might be angry enough to do it.)

All in all, lovely. Even with the angst. <3

[erethesunrises]

pffffft using logic when I'm writing angst for these two. WHAT DO YOU TAKE ME AS. luckily writing fluff requires no logic or plot, whee!