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writerverse Phase 2, Challenge #23

Apr 26, 2012 10:22

TITLE: A Lunch Date Back in Time
GENRE: Nonfiction
WORD COUNT: 375
RATING: G
SUMMARY: Corporate restaurant dining offers its own thoughtful charm.
NOTES: A bit of meta in the beginning, I guess? Occurred April 24, 2012.

( Last time I was at a Steak and Shake, radio Top 40 was playing. Clashes with the '50s buggy car ambiance. )

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A Lunch Date Back in Time riverotter1951 May 11 2012, 15:09:03 UTC

This is nice. A unplanned date as the result of waiting for car repair. The description of the diner coupled with thoughts is good. Eating the Hershey's Special Dark and thinking of the past makes me want one. Interweaving the past with the present is crisp.

How long did it take to get the car repaired?

Re: A Lunch Date Back in Time erifnosmirc May 11 2012, 16:31:30 UTC

Hee, it was a very tasty milkshake indeed. Good choice to treat myself. The car actually took three to four hours, so after I ate I still had time to kill which I did by writing and reading at the shop since there wasn't anywhere else within walking distance I could spend it.

Thanks for commenting! It was a fun time.