Legend of the Mord'Sith: Deception - Chapter 2

[erinlier004]

Pairing: Cara/Kahlan

Rating: M
Word Count: 6124
Author: Mistresserin
Beta: Fifi
Author’s Note: See Chapter for disclaimers
Chapter Two

“What do you mean, on the verge of war?!” Kahlan asked incredulous.
Keltar sighed and lowered his deep brown eyes to the floor. “I’m sorry, Mother Confessor, but Confessor Dennee didn’t fill me in on the details. All I

Comments

[chaniliet]

Just read the two chapters and i loved it. I'll be looking forward for more :)

[erinlier004]

Thank you :)

[olli01a]

Lately it was somewhat quiet in this journal. So I'm glad there is a new epic story telling a new adventure of Cara and Kahlan.

I like the way you show Cara and Kahlan's closeness and Richard drifting apart from them. Keep posting.

[erinlier004]

I'm glad you like it ;)

[cara_cersei]

This is a really good story- love the character development so far. Can't wait for more! :D

[erinlier004]

Thank you :)

[mrswoman]

Enjoyed the second chapter too :)

Love the different dynamics you are creating. Of course, the Cara/Kahlan 'something' *g* but also the Kahlan/Richard dynamic (where Kahlan is slowly coming to her senses), and especially the Cara/Zedd dynamic, you've got that just right with the constant sniping at underwritten by caring of each other.

Looking forward to more.

[erinlier004]

Thank you. I'm really enjoying writing this and all these positive comments fuel my muse more and more.

[jecica84]

Richard is so dumb and mean sometimes... You're doing great in developing Kahlan/Cara relationship. Keep up the good work!

[erinlier004]

Lol, yeah, he is. Thank you for your comment.