Command me fic #9 - POTC - Keep Me For Thee

[erinrua]

I have not forgotten my promises, or you, my flisties and friends. ;-)

Title: Keep Me For Thee
Author: ErinRua
Rating: PG
Length: @ 200
Characters: Will Turner
Notes/Disclaimers/Summary: Who holds the dark captain's heart, when he is far at sea?
A double drabble written for kahva who requested," I'm joining in the call for POTC fic, and I'd love to

Comments

[immortal_jedi]

Oh, yes, beautiful. Such poetry.

[erinrua]

Thank you so much! :-)

And your icon is of the win! *g*

[elerrina_amanya]

This is beautiful! I especially liked the imagery you used for Will's descriptions of the woman he loves: warrior-bright and tiger fierce is perfect. I'm so thrilled by all the Will-fic that has been appearing round the place...thanks for sharing this =)

[erinrua]

Thank you *so* much for your lovely words! I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale. Thank you. :-)

[sharklady35]

Agree that 'warrior-bright and tiger fierce' does, indeed, set a new benchmark for describing Liz.

I shall definitely be watching for more of your writing.

[erinrua]

Hi, and thank you so much! I love meeting new readers and I'm happy to have pleased you. :-) I'm rather hit-and-miss on my PoTC fan fiction these days, but I also write Supernatural, if you should swing that way. *g* Anyhow, thank you for reading, and I hope I'll have the chance to please you again. :-)
Cheers ~

Erin

[pearlseed]

Thanks dear one, twas lovely done with full heart, as Will does. He couldn't help but love Elisabeth and Jack, equally and different I suppose. He was eat up with her and true, beautiful combination.

[erinrua]

Thank you!! :-) I enjoyed writing this little piece, and it delights me that you enjoyed reading.

[honorat]

This is marvelous. I find I'm only interested in Elizabeth with Will in post AWE fics, so it's a sheer delight to find you writing the two of them so beautifully together. The more often I read this, the more there is to love about your pacing and the rhythm of your words.

I love how all Will's tormented soul finds refuge in Elizabeth's love. Your descriptions of how he sees her are fantastic: warrior-bright and tiger fierce, furious tenderness of her eyes, and slender, formidable hands

Of course Elizabeth had always been the keeper of his heart. How else could it be? You capture the rightness that is the two of them perfectly.

[erinrua]

Oh, how I adore your feedback. I do. I just wanna wrap myself up in it and snuggle all cozy in my captain's chair here at my desk. *g* Thank you so much, luv. I adore that my pacing worked for you, and YAY that you felt/saw all the points I aimed to make. \o/ Thank you for reading, and thank you for saying such kind and wonderful things. I'm sorry my muses don't dish out PoTC more often. *HUGS!*

*pauses to gaze at your lovely icon* mmmmmm. :-)