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Command me fic #10 - POTC - A Matter of Speaking

Sep 14, 2008 22:06

Title: A Matter of Speaking
Author: ErinRua
Rating: PG
Length: @ 1300 words
Characters: Jack Sparrow, Will Turner
Notes/Disclaimers/Summary: Will, Jack, and few choice words.
A ficlet written for honorat whose prompt read:" *Drool* Something in your African Star Universe for PotC?" Which, post- AWE, I can only interpret to mean any universe in which ( Read more... )

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Comments 23

merithehobbit September 15 2008, 18:59:37 UTC

Bwahahahahaa! This is fantastic! Your sense of dialog and timing is, as always, precise and detailed.

For some reason this little bit: "Perfectly," Jack purred, a broad display of ivory and gold beaming in the dim light, and he minced about to face the other way. captured Jack in one fell dramatic swoop. Well done. :D

erinrua September 20 2008, 22:08:36 UTC

LOL, thank you, dear hobbit lass! I'm glad I could make you laugh. Hee, thanks so much for your wonderful words: my muses are very happy. *HUGS!*

immortal_jedi September 16 2008, 05:03:06 UTC

that ending is SO completely "Jack". Lovely.

erinrua September 20 2008, 22:09:29 UTC

LOL, thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed my little Jack-romp. *g* And your icon is priceless - Oh, Norry! LOL!

sharklady35 September 16 2008, 15:41:49 UTC

So now we can add Streaking to Jack's list of egregious crimes. I'd have liked to see that.

> "Jack, nothing with you is 'mere' or 'simple'." <

Aye, but some of it is hilarious! Esp. love how you slipped in the nautical refs, and Jack's 'halo.'

erinrua September 20 2008, 22:10:44 UTC

LOL! Yes, a nekkid, streaking Jack would definitely be a sight to behold. *G* Thanks muchly for reading!

mamazano September 18 2008, 23:04:21 UTC

This is incredibly well done and so in character. I can only echo what has been said above. I love it!

erinrua September 20 2008, 22:11:49 UTC

Aw, thank you for such kind words for my little fic. I'm very happy *you* are a happy reader. Thanks! :-)

veronica_rich December 2 2009, 23:00:41 UTC

I have no idea if you posted this elsewhere and I commented already on it a year or so ago, but I hope I did if I read it. It was hilarious! (And it does sound familiar, so I sure hope I did leave feedback.)

erinrua December 3 2009, 00:35:36 UTC

I've got this thing posted a few places, some of which I've forgotten where they are, lol! But I'm delighted to have been rediscovered, and in return re-delighted you. :-) Thank you so much for the smile! :-)