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eriphi

Appropriately Dressed

Oct 14, 2011 23:38

Title: Appropriately Dressed
Rating: G
Word Count: Around 410
Characters: The Doctor
Summary: There is no way he is letting her go out dressed like that!

Author's Note: For the one shot challenge at who_contest Hope you enjoy...

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a_phoenixdragon October 15 2011, 01:35:55 UTC

LOL!! LOVED LOVED LOVED!!!

*Spins with Joy!!*

You had me going there and just - wheee!! This was a great fill of the prompt!

*Happy!Squishes*

eriphi October 15 2011, 19:08:03 UTC

I'm so, so glad you liked it! I've been away this week (October school holidays, visiting Edinburgh and Glasgow and playing tourist for a few days), and I've been playing around with this. I'm not happy with the whole story - I'm not sure it flows as well as I like, but the punch is the last line, and that's all I wanted in the end. I might keep fiddling before I post it anywhere else.

But, in the end, thank you again and always, for your kind words.

swan_secrets October 15 2011, 09:24:48 UTC

Simply beautiful, you got the Doctor perfect, and that last line was a thing of pure joy. It's one of those stories that there is so much gained by reading again and picking up just how well it was put together.

eriphi October 15 2011, 19:15:10 UTC

Wow! You are far too kind. I'm glad you liked it, and that the last line gave the desired effect. I did write it especially vague regarding which doctor it might be. Hopefully it works for whoever is in our head at the time (my mental image was of the 11th doctor arguing with Amy).

mae_stark October 15 2011, 14:40:00 UTC

Oh. My. Gosh. I didn't see that coming! I thought it was Rose or something.
That was fantastic! Well done!

eriphi October 15 2011, 19:26:13 UTC

Hehe! I'm glad you liked it - and isn't it funny. I had Amy half in mind (well obviously it was the TARDIS that was most in mind!) with a pair of boots and a scandalous little skirt. I'm really pleased that you thought of Rose instead.

licklesoxy October 17 2011, 14:41:38 UTC

Hehe, I had a feeling you were going in that direction, and I'm so glad you did! Can totally see this happening :D

Lovely writing ♥

eriphi October 23 2011, 21:50:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I did try to make it obvious, but not obvious. If that makes sense :)

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eriphi October 23 2011, 21:52:15 UTC

Thank you! Totally unworthy, really :) I still don't think it flows as well as it should, but I'm so pleased people enjoyed it.

Still think your fic was superb. And not just because you got Snow Patrol in there...