Supernatural fic: Honorable Enterprise (PG-13)

Feb 24, 2011 13:21

(Ohmigosh y'all, I've never cross-posted before. Is this what it's like to write in a big fandom? Weird....)

Title: Honorable Enterprise
Author: erisinia 
Rating: PG-13 (for 'Hell is a nasty place' and 'Dean is a potty mouth and a bad influence')
Genre and/or Pairing: gen, au
Spoilers: let's go with seasons 4 & 5.
Warnings: Language, blood'n'gore, fallen-ish ( Read more... )

fic, supernatural

Leave a comment

Comments 50

angel_kink February 24 2011, 22:18:40 UTC
I'd love to see what else you do in this universe. I like this story a lot.

Also, I'm a relatively new fan too. I marathoned the first 5 1/2 seasons in December/January. So I've only been a fan for, uh, two months I guess? It's great, isn't it?! :D

Reply

erisinia February 25 2011, 03:19:25 UTC
Thank you! It would be interesting to see where things fall if I can work out the details. *crosses fingers*

Pretty awesome, yup! I've been keeping on the sunny side of fandom and everyone's been really nice. ^.^

Reply


learned_soul February 24 2011, 22:34:58 UTC
I think this might be one of my favorite 'what ifs' that I've read concerning Cas rescuing Dean from Hell. I like how you describe how the angels see Castiel vs how Castiel's Father sees him- how he persues his fate rather then just letting it happen to him and jut how human that is.
"Dean Winchester," the visitor says, as calmly as though he had taken the next stool over at a bar.

He clears his throat a little. "Come here often?" he asks, because he might as well be brain-dead if he's going to give up being a smart ass.

"No," the other says simply. "We must leave."This bit just made me laugh. Because of course Dean is going a smart ass no matter what ( ... )

Reply

erisinia February 25 2011, 03:21:06 UTC
Dude, thanks so much for your detailed reply!

No idea why but I keep imaging him raiding office supply stores now.
...maybe because that would be AWESOME? XD

I hope to write more too. Thanks again for reviewing. :D

Reply


silvrhuntress February 24 2011, 23:13:19 UTC
This was awesome fun!

(And yes, Bobby is not stupid.)

Reply

erisinia February 25 2011, 03:21:55 UTC
Thank you!

(yup! Takes a smart man to stay alive in that business and keep those boys mostly alive.)

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

erisinia February 25 2011, 03:23:24 UTC
Thank you very much!

Reading fanfic helped a lot with the characters. I've found that if you can get the dialogue (speech patterns and the like) to sound right, it covers a multitude of characterization sins.

I hope to write more, there's so many fun possibilities. ^.^

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

erisinia February 25 2011, 03:27:16 UTC
Awesome! My biggest worries about my writing regards a tendency to get all cerebral and talky and stuffy, so I'm really glad it didn't seem to drag.

Well, I started out in the Hairspray fandom. I've written Doctor Who, Chuck, Leverage, NCIS, Knight Rider, DC comics...I tend to drift towards small fandoms because in the big ones someone else has already written the kind of thing I want to read. 8)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up