A little scene I've been toying around with in my head

[ertai_lapis]

So I've been writing again lately, piecing scenes together under a general theme I started back in my first semester at Tulane, with the opening chapter of a sci-fi/adventure novel(la) for my creative writing survey course. This little scene was one I've been writing and re-writing in my little black notebook I carry around at school.

Comments

[delirifacient]

This is awesome! I love how you come out of the gate swinging:-) You have a knack for flow and for capturing dialogue. Very tight. I want more!