Echoes of sense 8/9

[eruvandeaini]

Title: Echoes of sense Part 8/9
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[notcosyatall]

OHMYGOODNESS i have been positively been refreshing this webpage for ages waiting for this!! and it was so worth it :)
yay more mark! yay, return of annie! grrr cliffhanger! grrr penultimate part- there must be more...
to summarise: i loved it! poor george though :( i totally imagined that that would be how he would react. and i love mitchell all the more; he's saving annie *yay*
sorry; rant over.

[eruvandeaini]

There's one more, but not tonight :D

[hazelayes]

Oh noes! That just leaves Nina on the 'outside', unless the vicar knows some fancy moves... *bites nails* And how come Mitchell and his pack aren't ripping throats right now?

[eruvandeaini]

It does leave Nina outside for now - I've sort of had this in mind just as a first episode, if that helps.

[gryffinclaw]

Nooooooo what a cliffhanger ending! I need more!

Great chapter. Omg I do not even know what to say! Can not wait to see what is going to happen in the next one. Love where you are going with this fic! Keep up the good work.

[nell_aria]

Holy Moly! What are you doing to us, Eru!> What are you doing to our beloved trio?! Something about that woman's greeting at the end was decidedly chilling - her lack of perturbation, I think, and her obvious lack of human feeling towards Annie. Mitchell's plan didn't sound great - there are some obvious flaws - but at the moment his vampire crew seem like the best option they had. Unless in this story, Mark is 'the weapon'. Loved his 'matyrdom - oh what the hell!' line :D Very in-character, meshes perfectly with the dialogue TW created for him.
Once again, I am awed by your amazing talent, eru: this story is fantastic, in every possible sense of the word!

[shootingstars88]

This story is great, really good characterisation and a cracking plot that's really tripping along nicely. Looking forward to more :)