Comments | eruvandeaini: Fic: Doing Domestic

eruvandeaini

Fic: Doing Domestic

Jun 24, 2009 20:33

Title: Doing Domestic

Characters: TenII/Rose

Genre: One-shot angst

Word count: approx 1600

Summary: The Doctor returns to Rose.

A/N: Wrote this ages ago as my version of long-term‘domestic’ for TenII and Rose, and found it after yet another computer meltdown. Thought I might as well post it, as I quite like some of the interaction, and a bit of angst is ( Read more... )

fic, tenii/rose, doctor who

Comments 9

spiritofeowyn June 24 2009, 21:35:51 UTC

Wow. that was raw. I feel for poor Dr.2.

eruvandeaini June 25 2009, 08:43:10 UTC

I gave them a good kicking, yes, sorry. I was just never convinced that domestic would make them happy for long.

helygen June 24 2009, 21:48:54 UTC

Oh wow, this is harsh, and raw, and very very real - nice work! :)

eruvandeaini June 25 2009, 08:44:39 UTC

Thank you! I thought their communication problems wouldn't be resolved easily in RL. Of course, we all know that they didn't bother with domestic and actually everything was fine...

helygen June 25 2009, 18:51:49 UTC

Absolutely! :)

asahifirsa June 27 2009, 11:18:13 UTC

That's a very interesting and realistic way to see it and I like it! A lot!

eruvandeaini June 27 2009, 12:29:06 UTC

Thank you! 'Realistic' is a great compliment, it's what I was aiming for.

lovely susanb03 June 28 2009, 23:09:43 UTC

sad but lovely

obsessed2 June 30 2009, 09:33:18 UTC

Oooh! That was *very* good. Very believable - you got the characters just right. I could really hear them saying the dialogue and see the gestures. And their motivation was right too. Well done!