Fic: He Rambled On

[escapethelight]

Title: He Rambled On
Pairing: Michael Johns/David Cook
Rating: R for the overuse of the F-bomb
Disclaimer:  Don't own them; all for fun. 
Warning: Depression, suicide
Summary: It really hurts to to want someone so bad and know that you can never have them.
Author's Notes:  Written for a fic contest over at

Comments

[matertenebrarum]

wow.

that was incredibly well-written and deeply unsettling.

=( *pout*

[escapethelight]

haha. Sorry! I was in a weird mood. I'll take the wow as a positive.

[matertenebrarum]

my "wow"s are always positive! i only comment on stuff when I like it.

i always do that with the "wow"s and wind up having to explain myself. lol sometimes it is the only word that comes to mind, though.

[escapethelight]

yea! Well I'm really glad then for the wow, and the fact you commented.

[jointhechoir]

Wow, that was really disturbing and really wonderful. My favorite combination! (-;

[escapethelight]

My favorite combination too. =) I've stopped pushing the angst out of my head. It's just too fun.

[mom_o_cass]

so well written and haunting. LOVE IT.

[escapethelight]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. =)

[cherazz]

Oh my dear god ;_; I don't know what to say...I'm speechless...the depth of everything in this was so incredibly moving. The pain just radiated off in waves...and it just rips me apart that he tried to kill himself ;_;

I adore how you wrote this. You keep everyone guessing as to which one it could be. My gut told me it was Michael from here, "I really woke up, and it wasn’t him. I smelled that perfume I bought her; I felt slender arms wrapped around me." I don't know why, my I knew right away that the woman was Stacey and not Kim.

Then my opinion changed when you mentioned the person wearing a bracelet. I thought, well David wears bracelets and Michael doesn't really, but then I realized the bracelet may have been a gift from David when he visited the East coast.

I thought this was absolutely stunning. You did an incredible job. You'll find this in my memories and favorites for sure! *big hug* BRAVO!♥

[escapethelight]

Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it, and am honored you will keep it in your favorites. As for keeping people guessing, I wasn't quite sure who I wanted it to be at first; when the idea for Valentine's day came around, I knew it had to be Michael. Again, thank you for the lovely review. <3

[cherazz]

My pleasure, seriously! This was incredible! I absolutely loved it!

*big hugs*

[thethingiswhat]

So this was absolutely amazing! It was really haunting how you showed the way that Michael's mental state changed. This was sort of unsettling but I loved it nonetheless.

[escapethelight]

Thanks! I was going for creepy. :D