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escapethelight

Endings

Jan 11, 2008 01:42

Title: Endings
Pairing: JD/Cox
Rating: PG-13 for mentions of sex
Author's note/Summary: So I wrote this is basically 20 minutes. A spark of inspiration hit me and I needed to get it out. Anyway, don't own the characters, just having fun with them. It's pretty different compared to everything I have written before. Angst ahead. Un-beated.

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Comments 7

pavonine January 11 2008, 10:45:40 UTC

"Pages upon pages were filled with sentimental bullshiit."

That sentence I especially liked (though you may want to delete the extra "i"). Sentimental juxtaposed with bullshit works well for JD's state of mind: it's romantic, like he was, and all crap now that he doesn't have Perry anymore.

Very, very good job.

escapethelight January 11 2008, 16:38:51 UTC

thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. And yah, I love that sentence.
And fixed. Thanks for the catch too.

T______T kleimo91 January 12 2008, 17:09:23 UTC

*sniff* *sniff*
It's really sad and written very well... and... sadly.... *sniff* *drop*
I like it :)

Re: T______T escapethelight January 12 2008, 18:12:20 UTC

aww don't cry! *hands tissue*
Glad you liked it.

scruby January 12 2008, 20:53:00 UTC

Aw, this is so sad. ): Why do you try to make me so sad?
This was very good. I really like your writing.

It was very sad that they broke out, but was sadder and annoyed me even more was that they were still with Jordan and evil!Kim. I could see them doing that to themselves so they won't hurt them and their children, but it's just horrible that they've to stay with someone they don't love. ):

Also, just so you know, I read your fic before I went to sleep and I had a dream about JD and Perry breaking up and Perry is trying to talk to him but JD is angry with him and doesn't want to talk to him. I'm pretty sure your fic was in my subconscious was one of the reasons I had this dream, lol! So thank you, I love having JD/Cox dreams! (:

escapethelight January 13 2008, 07:30:35 UTC

Haha, yah, I'm starting to not like her too--Kim that is. I liked her for the two/three? episodes of season 5.

And I'm glad I could give you JD/Cox dreams. I always hope for them, but haven't had one yet. With all the writing lately, I'm hoping one comes tonight! *fingers crossed*

pikapika217 September 22 2009, 12:47:04 UTC

This was sad, but really good actually. It's also interesting to see JD sour at aspects of Romance, and also: perfect use of Carla