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[escapingthevoid]

I am drained of myself
my chest is empty
and left alone with
nothing left to
grasp onto
strive for
love on
nothing left to do

Reaching to cling
on to something
Anything to save me
to give me sustenance
family
friends
lovers
to give me sustenance God

May add more will edit any comments or editing advice would appretiated.

Comments

[sapience_engine]

I wish to wield my awesome ignorance and lack of appreciation in order to assist you, yet cannot. Could you give more information? Is this for class, or just something you did for fun? Maybe some background info on the intended message?

[escapingthevoid]

This was just something fun to express the emotions I was feeling at the time. Im trying to envoke those emotions which is a depressed or lonely state with sliver of hope at the end. Haven't decided if I should continue the poem to where it remains in depression or out of it into renewal fo strength and sense of self.

Ill take "renewal fo strength and sense of self" for 500, Alex.

[shatterdfaith82]

Keep it coming gookie.