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Mar 07, 2006 14:29

Title:The Balcony Scene: Take One
Author: esclaramonde
Rating: M (language, and implications of adult naughtiness)
Pairings/Characters: Katie/Marcus
Words: 1386
Summary: Katie has a late-night suitor, who is in for a big surprise.
Disclaimer: Marcus, Katie and the entire cast of Harry Potter belong to JK Rowling. Who I am not, in case you didn't ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

anonymous March 7 2006, 04:45:57 UTC

Very nice. Lovely, in fact! Bloody George needed a good kick in the arse, but I suppose what he got was about as good.

So...more please?

esclaramonde March 7 2006, 05:06:53 UTC

Thank you so much. I have to confess I agonised about posting it for a few days.

I've got several bunnies hopping at any one time, the tricky bit is finding time at work to transcribe them from the scribbles I write on the train.

Thanks for commenting - it's really made my afternoon. :-D

metafrantic March 7 2006, 14:07:48 UTC

My pleasure. BTW, that wasn't supposed to be anonymous, I guess I forgot to log in first.

More!

anonymous March 7 2006, 14:05:11 UTC

This is a really nicely written fanfic. I liked the subtle reminders that they are wizards in the shakespere ref. Well done
caw

esclaramonde March 8 2006, 05:32:00 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your encouragement.

jenszabo March 8 2006, 01:42:18 UTC

Oh! Oh! This was such a huge pick me up! Thank you so much. :D

I love how Katie's exasperation with George contrasts nicely with how sensual she is with Marcus. I just love their playfulness...Katie is so happily certain how much he wants her, and Marcus is doing his 'demanding brute' routine almost as a flirtation.

Thank you! :D

I loved this. :D I hope you continue to write. If you do think you will, would you mind terribly if I friended you?

esclaramonde March 8 2006, 05:27:54 UTC

Thank you so much for your wonderful words - I'm stoked!

I'm hoping that I can keep writing, I certainly have plenty of bunnies, the tricky part for me is getting the computer time. This little fic took me three half-hour lunch times to get through. If I do post anything more I'll certainly let you know. Feel free to friend me if you'd like. May I do likewise?

jenszabo March 9 2006, 02:37:03 UTC

The 'plenty of bunnies' makes me very very happy. :)

Friended you. I don't have anything up on my lj at the moment, it's all screened 'private', but I will announce Detained updates and I might go back and just make it friends only. So friend if you like but I won't be offended if you don't.

Love your ficlet. :)

angylinni March 9 2006, 02:29:08 UTC

ooh~ bounces happily! That was great!

Gah, so romantic and cavemany, I just absolutely adored this!

More? please? :D

esclaramonde March 14 2006, 05:30:03 UTC

Thanks heaps! I wanted to show that they were secure in their relationship, but also very possessive of each other. (and hey, if Marcus likes to demonstrate that by going through the caveman routine, then who am I to gainsay him).

I've got some other stuff I'm working on / working out / polishing, so if I post any I'll put the word out.

redcandle17 March 9 2006, 02:30:07 UTC

Ooh, sexy Marcus. I loved how George was forgotten once Marcus and Katie got their hands on each other.

esclaramonde March 14 2006, 05:32:19 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Who could remember George Weasley when you've got 6'2" of Marcus Flint sucking on your neck? (Or 5'8" of Katie Bell wrapped around you, for that matter).