Possibly pre-Rayne fic

[esclaramonde]

Have allegedly committed fic. I've had bunnies a-plenty ever since I joined the Rayne-ship and one of them had me go as far as committing pen to paper (and subsequently fingers to keyboard). Thing is, I'm not sure about it. I'm not so hot with the humour, which is a big part of the Firefly fandom. And I just happen to prefer the two

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[momin8r]

hey! i just realized i didn't comment! apologies......this was just lovely! i followed that lucky water droplet....the visual was wonderful! i don't think there is anything yummier then that man in nothing but a towel all nice & wet! i look forward to more! calling herself a moron was perfect!!! take care :D

[romanceguru]

Oh, why did she run? When is she ever going to get the chance to admire that lovely exhibition again! Sorry, I guess I just wanted to stay a bit longer. ; P

I love that she is bunking next to him, increases the odds that they will have to run into each other. You went and got me hot and bothered along with River. Wonderful first Rayne fic, keep ‘em coming!

[karanina]

Well can ya blame a girl for her brain going blank when THAT's staring her in the face?

[theneis]

LOL. Awesome.

[cedelede]

I've read this before but thankfully have found myself stumbling upon it again. I can't believe I didn't comment on this the first time. Because, wow. I think we all needed that Jayne imagery. Thank you thank you thank you for that imagery.

And your River is spot on from the "unsettling hiccup" to the vivid and unique description of the droplet running down Jayne's skin.

Ooh, and I loved the way she unconsciously mimicked Kaylee with the space-bug thing!