Comments | esorydoolb: Mind Game

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Mind Game | Stage 1

Aug 08, 2015 17:10

Series: Fall Out
Title: Mind Game | Stage 1
Author: esorydoolb
Beta: musequera
Pairing: There's a Dom. And there's a Matt.
Rating: G
WARNINGS: Nope.
Summary: Set in a world contaminated by radioactivity. Humanity's last resource: Drones.
Disclaimer: This is fictional and I don't own Matt or Dom.
Author's Note: Helloo. I'm a little bit nervous posting this. Ha yes, it ( Read more... )

fic, fall out

Comments 13

spiralstatix August 8 2015, 16:26:18 UTC

I love this!! I love how you describe everything and this concept is so fascinating, I'm really curious and excited about where you're going to take this :D

esorydoolb August 8 2015, 16:30:21 UTC

Heey cheers for commenting :D I'm just really glad that you like the concept, thank youu xx

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esorydoolb August 8 2015, 19:59:52 UTC

Yaay thank you haha.
Have to thank my Beta too for making it flawless ;)
It just bothers me that I'm generally a rlly slow writer, and the whole language thing is kind of unfamiliar, but I'll keep trying!
That is a super lovely comment!!
x

burnettc August 9 2015, 04:23:24 UTC

so intriguing can't wait for more <3

esorydoolb August 9 2015, 10:52:55 UTC

ah that makes me happy, I hope I won't disappoint xx

tamarelmensdorp August 9 2015, 07:31:01 UTC

"They were human, he was not" intriguing.

Omg, this is awesome! I love the way Matt thinks and feels yet doesn't really think and feel at all. I'm saying this wrong ...I don't know how to word it, but I really love the feel of this story. Hope you are encouraged enough to keep on writing.

esorydoolb August 9 2015, 10:57:13 UTC

Thank you so much <3
This is definitely encouraging!!
Hope I'll be able to maintain the atmosphere.

wangoes August 24 2015, 17:02:53 UTC

This is so amazing!! I love your descriptive writing and details, also the concept is just great!! Im totally looking forward for more. :>

esorydoolb August 24 2015, 20:26:10 UTC

Thank you <3 That's amazing to hear. I need to hurry up, eh? :P

wangoes August 24 2015, 20:32:08 UTC

Hihi, you can go ahead and take your time, its also great to see you on lj! :-D Your art is fantastic.

esorydoolb August 24 2015, 20:42:16 UTC

Well yeah next chap is almost done, I hope.
naww don't say that, you're making me blush xD but thanks! I don't know what took me so long!
(And I adore you as an artist, you're doing some great work!)

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