P3 plot review for capstone

[esotericpanacea]

The twenty-fifth hour lie between 12:00 and 12:01 AM. This “dark hour” turns the moon yellow, clouds green, and the guttural fluids to blood. Most people are transmogrified into coffins-literality dead to the world, but a few with the Potential walk the streets, seeing what no one else does. The high school, normally Gekkoukan High, turns into

Comments

[sandvich]

You've got a bit of an error in your summary here: killing Ryoji is what nets the player a "bum ending," whereas letting him live leads to the promises at the shrine, fighting Nyx and Strega, etc.

[esotericpanacea]

Ouch--thanks! 'Tis fixed.