LJ Idol Week 5 - "Afterthought"

[esotericsmile]

This is an entry for therealljidol. The topic this week is "Afterthought"The ocean churned relentlessly, one wave pushing the next to submission, causing it to tumble into the deep steel gray of the sea. The skies were heavy and there was no sign of the sun. The wind was loud enough to drown out even the calypso music pouring from the speaker on the wall. The

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[imafarmgirl]

Thought nauseated thoughts just reading this, all that rolling. grins.

[wyrdfishes]

Me too! Good post. :D

[basric]

Well written. Well done. Sympathize with the seasickness. Always have to medicate when going on the water.

[myrna_bird]

Such an unpleasant way to be on vacation!

[nyxocity]

Heh! Nice use of the prompt at the end there! Also, I love how the entry itself is like an afterthought during Steamboat Willy or something :)

[roina_arwen]

LOL - I like your play on words!