Locke and Terra - Burn

[shatteredjewels]

Title: Burn

Comments

[deadcellredux]

Wow-- I've never read Terra written like this before. The momentum that picked up towards the end was intense-- I love how dark this is.

[silvr_dagger]

I don't even know what to say here, except wow. This is intense and very well-written and entirely believable.

[girl_chama]

Oh man. Oh man.

Very intense. I, too, have never read Terra this way before, but I was thinking if she did not have to face the esper side of herself, if she was put into a "comfortable" box where she could lose herself in lies, I could see her going this way. Subdued, given structure and purpose without having to question it. Yep, I could see her taking refuge in orders that quench her pain. Sort of. Killing Locke, I mean.

Man, so intense.