[PoT]:: Kirihara/Yanagi Playing Tag.

[espial]

Title: Playing Tag.
Pairing: Kirihara/Yanagi
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/sex/3,392
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Prince of Tennis.
Summary: In which Kirihara and Yanagi are involved in a complicated game, and tennis is more than it seems.
Notes: Please let me know your thoughts/constructive crit/comments.

Comments

[uchuu_kita]

I hope you write more of this pairing ♥ That was great.

[espial]

Thank you. :) They're a secret ship of mine, so it was fun to give it a shot. Thank you for reading.

[absolutehymn007]

That was a fantastic read! I absolutely admire your stories so it was nice to see an update!

I love all of the visual and aural detail - it just made everything so much more expressive and emotional. Even though they didn't say much, the mental guessing, the longing for company, the suspense, etc. really made it feel that they were connected at a level deeper than words and I really enjoyed that!

And when Kirihara finally figured it out... that part was so amazing (so passionate and genuine).

PS.
I didn't see it the first time, but when I went back to see something, I wanted to let you know that you accidentally mistyped 'Yanagi' in "teased along the inside of Yagani's thighs"

[espial]

Oh, thank you so much. I really really appreciate that and it means a lot to me. They're a secret ship for me, and so it was really fun to give them a shot and play around with their dynamic. I'm happy that you liked it, so very much. :)

Thanks. I thought I caught them all, but I missed that one and another one.

[absolutehymn007]

Nothing wrong with secret ships! My not-so-secret (and extremely uncommon) ship is Yanagi/Yagyuu. :) This was the first story I have read with Kirihara as the seme (I have only recently gotten Yanagi/Kirihara a few months ago when I wrote a oneshot and now while working on a multi-chapter fic). It just worked very well in your story and I commend you for that!

The one that sometimes escapes me is 'Sanda'. For some reason, I miss that middle a from time to time (sorry fukubuchou!). And I've had a few 'Kirhara's too. Something about those middle vowels I tell you

Best of luck to you in your future writing!

[espial]

I really like the idea of that. O.O Yanagi/Yagyuu is not one that I have considered, and it's intriguing. :) Thank you very much. :) It really was unplanned and just kind of happened. I was sitting there staring at the word document, very much, "He did what now?" but I'm really glad it works, and that you and others are responding to it.

I do that in texts. Thankfully auto-correct fixes it.

You too!

[perkyandproud]

Veeeery nice!

And, as a side note, if his team wasn't impressed with him before they saw that match, they *had* to have been after that! :-)

[espial]

Thank you! :)

>.> he has Yanagi's approval that's for certain. \o/

[feihu]

Wow...absolutely amazing. Also, this is the first time I've seen this pairing with Akaya as seme. I like it, and it certainly fit the situation.

[espial]

Thank you. :D I'm really happy that you liked it. It was something that I wanted to try, because I hadn't seen a lot of it.

[darkelfgrl]

SJAKHFKLJSDF. I love this verse. I love your writing. And damn you, you're making me like this pairing.

*huffs*

Also, I totally find it hot that Kirihara tops Renji. >.>

[espial]

I'm thinking of playing around in it more.

Shhhh...stop. You KNOW what happens when those thoughts happen.

And yus. :D

<33333333333s you.