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[PoT]:: Inui/Eiji In a Single Bound II

Jan 22, 2012 21:57

Title: In a Single Bound II
Pairing: Inui/Eiji, Kirihara/Bunta.
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/Darker themes, kidnapping/ 3,424
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Prince of Tennis.
Summary: In which the two pairs make their move, and lose someone important.
Notes: Please let me know your thoughts/constructive crit/comments. This is ( Read more... )

c: marui bunta, s: prince of tennis, fic, c: kirihara akaya, c: inui sadaharu, c: kikumaru eiji

Comments 11

everlind February 9 2012, 13:01:03 UTC

ACK NO DON'T STOP THERE D: (you had better make sure that Aka-chan ends up safe and sound in his senpai's arms, you, or else *shakes fist*!!! -kidding (only not really >_>))

And I look forward so damn much to seeing Hyotei make its big entrance. So. Damn. Much!

starianprincess March 29 2012, 18:09:30 UTC

Okay, now I want a story focused on how Marui and Kirihara met. It'd be like a sidestory in a manga! And I can't wait to see what happens when they come face-to-face with Atobe, Oshitari, and the corporation. Maybe we'll see more familiar faces? :D Bits I especially loved about this include (1) adding some fault to Eiji's character - I love that he's not this perfect guy who wanted to save the world, but did it for fame; (2) the sweet slice-of-life-esque scene in the beginning; (3) and how you're building on the plot.