Crevices

Jun 13, 2009 21:22

Crevices

yunho/jaejoong, PG-13, romance, angst.

crevices:

(n)  A narrow crack or opening; a fissure or cleft.
all that remains of yunho and jaejoong, jaejoong and yunho are those little touches. red is the colour of betrayal. it's dirty and disgusting, mocks them both with decisions from the past.

a/n: this is thea/
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pairing: yunho/jaejoong

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heartoffire03 June 14 2009, 02:14:57 UTC
i, i, i, i, that was really sad ;A;

b-b-but i don't get it? D:

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esprit_lumiere June 14 2009, 03:12:26 UTC
/dies, i knew this wasn't too clear. XD ( ... )

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chloe1910 June 14 2009, 04:28:18 UTC
ah..I wanted to ask too cause I didn't quite get it too...Sorry, perhaps my mind is to simple to understand the meaning...

Thanks for the explanation.

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esprit_lumiere June 14 2009, 05:40:09 UTC
T_T, nonono, chloe anything but that! sometimes what the author thinks is clear in her head may not be clear to the reader. 8D, that means I need to work on expressing emotions better. :3

besides, that was i thought of and wrote this. if you imagined something different, i would love to hear it. :)

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snowflakes_nad June 14 2009, 04:08:36 UTC
that was very, very heartbreaking
<3

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esprit_lumiere June 14 2009, 05:40:36 UTC
:3, thank you! :)

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moonkissedx June 14 2009, 10:18:56 UTC
this broke my heart )':
a little confusing at first, but... yeah, I understood it in the end. :}

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