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skoomaaddict March 22 2013, 15:04:04 UTC
I don't know why but I was laughing/giggling all way through! Maybe because it was so obvious who it was... :p

This way of writing was so different!! I really liked it!!

"But I was expecting... more. In the front region, I mean." I loved that part! I lol-ed so much hahah :)

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esprz March 22 2013, 15:52:46 UTC
Ian can't help that he's flat chested! ;P Glad you thought it was funny :) I was thinking Anthony was a little too off character here, mainly because I based a lot of it on myself. Not that I ever woke up next to Ian Hecox after a bingeful night of drinking! That would be amazeballs. I'd snuggle up with him too :3

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skoomaaddict March 22 2013, 16:33:18 UTC
Waking up next to Ian would be more than amazeballs!! heheh C:

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mutual_death March 22 2013, 19:21:16 UTC
I like that the title is First Impressions and you haven't "touched up" the body of the work. That's clever!

Ahhhh...such a refreshing fic. I'm a big fan of "rambling prose" and I definitely appreciate anyone for trying different story formats. You should definitely be proud of this one. It's starts off very silly and goofy and ends with a "D'awww...that's so sweet!" moment. Loved every teeny tiny bit of it. [=

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esprz March 22 2013, 23:32:59 UTC
I am pretty proud! Thank you!

Actually it stems partially from another fic I wrote a while back and from a new idea I had a few days ago that was actually (and coincidentally) the same as Placentalions Four Years Foreplay fic only mine involved a video and alcohol as the culprit and a veeeery funny flirting scene where Anthony tries to "seduce" Ian but ends up making the situation more comical by the second and ends up seducing him with laughter XD

I don't know why I love having little tidbits of comedy here and there in a lot of my heavier fics. I suppose it lightens the mood somewhat ;)

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esprz March 27 2013, 07:07:49 UTC
Thanks xoxo

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9800andseagulls March 27 2013, 01:34:48 UTC
This was SO good!
That sounds like the perfect morning, maybe not the hangover but meh, I'd tolerate it.
I loved the style, well done!
And you wrote it at 3 in the morning pissed?
this is like better than work I could do sober, in the middle of the day, after taking writing classes...WITH NASA.

tbh in short I loved it :D

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esprz March 27 2013, 07:09:53 UTC
Honestly when I wake up with one it isn't as bad as people say (except this one time omg spinning room!) plus I was in that hungover/drunk state while writing this that you get in when about 2-3 hours pass after your last drink.
Thanks for reading! I always appreciate your comments xoxo

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