Twilight: Until the Break of Dawn (Edward/Bella)

[phoenix39]

Title: Until The Break Of Dawn

Comments

[darla_love]

Even though you haven't read all of New Moon and Eclipse this was excellently written! :) I really like your style, and you should try some more when you're done with the series.

[phoenix39]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked.
I'm sure my bunnies will hop even more when I finish the series.

[stardust787]

Wow! Jane, that's really good! You should write more.

I love the whole "I’ve been on the welcome mat of Death’s porch before" part. So true :P

[phoenix39]

Thanks Emily!
While I writing that part, I didn't know if people would think it's cleaver or lame. I'm you thought it was cleaver. :)

[stardust787]

you're welcome.

yeah it was clever!

[westlife_angel]

I'm so glad to finally find someone as knew to this fandom as I am!:D

I think you wrote all the characters perfectly and I hope to read more of this fandom from you.

[phoenix39]

I think you wrote all the characters perfectly
Thank you so much. *hides behind hair and blushes*

and I hope to read more of this fandom from you.
Thanks, though I don't have any ideas at the moment. Hopefully after I finish New Moon. How far along are you? Have you finished all three books yet?

[westlife_angel]

Sadly I have not finished all three books yet.):

I'm almost finished with the first book and I hope to buy 'New Moon' friday when I get paid.

[phoenix39]

I just finished New Moon last night. *zips lips*