fic: Don't try to fight our Chicago luck

[estei]

So yesterday was buffyaddict13's birthday and I wanted to write something for her but my writing-fu was broken and this morning it is still broken but I managed to cobble together some thoughts and scenes into what I hope is a story. I'm not quite sure it worked. Mostly this is self-indulgent something or other because I have thoughts about this season that

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[pizzapixie]

Oh poor Sammy. Will Dean tell him what Castiel said? I love how protective Dean was, frightened that Castiel was there to kill Sam. If this is what you come up with when you can't write? Please push through a lot more. I loved the whole feel.

[estei]

Thank you!

[fleshflutter]

I absolutely love how their conversations stretch over hours and get picked up and put down and it's just really well done. :)

[estei]

Thanks, sweetie!

[faunaana]

Oh, sweetie, this is just so lovely.

I love how the conversation is weaved in and out of their lives, like this delicate thread, that if they pull too hard on, will snap. ♥

This line, "He can’t watch as Sam tries so hard not to cry." SNIFF!

[estei]

*smishes you*

[jasmasson]

Oh boys.

♥

[estei]

♥

[kroki_refur]

OH GOD, SAM. This is so heartbreaking, babe, especially this:

“This is hard,” Sam says.

“What is?” Dean sits up, Sam is obviously in the mood to chat and he can forget about sleep until it passes.

“Everything,” Sam shrugs.

On the other hand, this:

Dean is losing patience with the hairpin turns and steep grades that come from driving in the Catskills. Tapping his fingertips against the steering wheel doesn’t really calm him down any, but it annoys Sam so it does make him feel a little better. The VW Jetta they’ve been stuck behind since goddamn Pennsylvania brakes every time the road turns downhill and Dean swears he can smell smoke coming from the brake pads. Dean tries to share the aggravation by launching into his usual speech about why only dumbasses ride the brakes, but Sam just keeps staring out the window, mooning at the leaves and “panoramic vistas

[estei]

YOU KNOW EXACTLY WHAT THE FUCK I AM TALKING ABOUT. I SHOULD HAVE HAD CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS' NAVIGATOR WITH ME.

[kroki_refur]

YOU DO KNOW HE NEVER MADE IT TO INDIA, RIGHT?

[estei]

THAT IS MY POINT.

IDIOT